Feedback

After the crit today, I have feedback, and improvements to make.

Firstly, the generally consensus was that the longer, thinner images worked better, as they looked more like a peep hole into something that shouldn't be happening. It was also suggested that I shoot with one style of hair, make up and styling for continuity. I will definitely need to use a new/better backdrop as it is impossible to remove them in photoshop, and it is ruining all of my images.

I need to work on a piece of writing for the book, as it won't really make sense without it.

I also need to think about whether I use more than one model, but this is unlikely and I don't think it would give the same message.

I will also consider more carefully what food I shoot with, as all the different types of food I used in the last shoot, gave very different messages of what I was talking about.